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Tuesday, April 9, 2019

The Tower - E-Book

This is my Novel -The Tower.Please let me know if there's anything i could add or improve on in the comments down below

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Monet. I am enjoying reading your E-Book. You use some great descriptive vocabulary that helps me visualise the story as I read. One thing that would improve Chapter 1 is putting capital letters at the beginning of each sentence.

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